Writing 365 – Word Play
This week we are supposed to get record low temperatures here in Portland, Oregon. It’s already cold (32 degrees) and it’s supposed to get down to around 19 degrees as the week progresses. That’s apparently a record low. To give those of you in cold states like Utah or Illinois some perspective, I’m from LA – where it doesn’t get below 40 degrees pretty much ever. And here in Portland, we have trouble dealing with a couple of inches of snow – nevermind extreme temperatures.
So, since this weather is unusual for us, I thought I’d try something different when writing about it. I am going to write a little poem and then I’m going to use the thesaurus to see if I can replace every word in the poem and make it a bit better/more interesting. Here goes!
1st Winter Poem
Icy cold shivers through leaves,
snapping at my fingertips,
ruffling my dog’s fur
clearing the azure sky.
2nd Winter Poem
Polar rawness shudders past stalks,
clutching on my digits,
tousling my pup’s coat,
brightening the cerulean firmament.
That’s pretty interesting. Two poems that say the same thing, but I definitely like the second one better, though I still prefer “sky” over “firmament.”
Well, that’s all for today! See you tomorrow!
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